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BM0603 l lJRNAllSTlC WRITING 1 ff m w Tufor ayle uah 65501124 C408 a l IT quot15 MINNIE This module aims to provide students with An overview oi the practice and process in Journalism writing An understanding of the process of basic news gathering writing interviews and editing skills The ability to deploylvarious tools to enhance the effectiveness of Journalistic writing l 0 39I39IS HOWE Journalistic writing is different from most of the writing you may have done for English classes There are similarities but also differences Some students get frustrated when they find out they must write in a journalistic style to satisfy the T requirements of this class Be patient with yourself Journalism is creative cutting edge and fun Journalistic writing means writing in a professional environment and with professional standards It means writing for an audience It means meeting deadlines ASSESSMENT CA1 Journalism Essentials CA2 News Writing ICA3 Online Newsletter Project News QuizzesClass Participation Wk5 Wk8 Wk18 Weekly 25 25 35 1 5 CA1 IOIJRNAIJSM ESSENTIALS 25 Description lCAt will be conducted in Week 5 Students will be given short questions on newswriting and reporting basics The written test will be administered in the classroom in one session 1 hour 20 mins TING 25 Description ICA 2 will be conducted in Week 8 Students will be tested on their ability to write a news report for a newspaper based on fact sheets provided The written test will be administered in the classroom in one session 1 hour 40 mins Slli39l39l39lill PRMIEC39I39 35 3 0NllNli Description ICA 3 will be given out in Week 14 Students are expected to hand in amp present the project in Week 18 Students will be tested on their ability to work as L a group and produce an online newsletter which will contain the following a 4 hard news stories b 2 feature stories 0 3 opinion pieces Reasons which are insufficient to warrant an extension include computer failures car failures or other transportation difficulties work conflicts and other study commitments Losing work through quotcomputer failurequot is not accepted as a reason for late submission Students should frequently save and backup their work files NOTE You are required to keep a soft copy of all submitted assignments tum amp NE s mums 15 To obtain marks in class a student is expected to 9 Be present and punctual in class 9 Be prepared for all hisher work 9 Participate in class discussion There will be a news quiz every lab session concerning events that have taken place in the previous week The 10 questions can cover hard news local and foreign sports entertainment health and anything big that has happened Name the country hit by a massive 9 magnitude earthquake on 11 March 2011 Japan How many nuclear reactors are located at Fukushima 5 Name the current President of Singapore Tony Tan Keng Yam I J t I E I 3 I i 5 F I i I quotr s I r I i I 14 c I a r v m w a 1 I I I A I w a a n f r m at L I W F a r I I r u n i I in I I a i I m i F I I I I I r 1 m E r19 1 I Irm E a I I Pi iI I r n 7 E I I I an Is a r I I I mu r I It i I I I at a a I K I E l I V i i J 9 I I i I u I u tr E I y a I m I I r I I I 3 ds painted on its body networking sites If Innair Name this latest craze to sweep socia Name the first airplane with angry b Batmaning F 6 Who is the new CEO of MediaCorp Shaun Seow News Corp has closed its 168year old tabloid after allegations that its journalists tapped the voice mails of murdered victims and paid police officers for stories News of the World 39 5 ni biidir 1 E 5 39 v quot3217 5541 x 39 quot W traNIl lll39Sm 39 a g 39 39 w 3 t h grleatesitqu 5 2e wgmym A lBEBEEUH39M39 1 7 i a nil i i I teem tiltsmmsaint rdjarewellataouir 1395l11ulo39 alters u 1 H n V i mtglgquot a Adilq K Name the designer for Kate Middleton s wedding dress 8 a u a a P c a r a quotjug mud are r r iii We i i i hi i i iiFi hi it i i I Ii in F r a rm r i a is F Fri u irth to her fourth child b l am 1 Ia w m m S a w A h r 3 n e s m H l m nlu n M k U a C O S e e b S D ab L t r e rk a h L V W O 9 1 o NYP policies regarding honesty can be found in the official student handbook o In BM0603 Journalistic Writing plagiarism misrepresentation or any form of cheating is a SGTGUS offense pet Adnnts t Plagiarism by RBIth 329 quotME ts tress t Th6 millashquot t l39lr V 7 1 Tean gten Pest pnbitshed an Edgar at G t m tweed 3353 at l n is fab 5393 P leaning fer twe artistes be a Tengtilne P t TIE 1 39 39 attepettes ewspapet at siting tt a seuree i T Lt I The nete Said the r 1 quot t a 1 bettet ieti and d ETTMT ES m t md Eub t tiai materiai th s upiteated witheut atttibutien fren39t r 39t at was 5 t E 931 39m li lja Repubiie newspaper Fortun 39 B S t Amid Plagiilii39Tney TTmbEI Leaves Magazine ism arge pests en the iDeaitBeelt bie Elt FEhmaer 26 sens I I 331 p m E In the Mareh 16 issue of Fortune magazine which will hit newsstands on Marsh 9 the magazine is issuing an apelegr to its readers for Plagiarizing N ew t39e39rkTi mes Reps quotin a number at business attieies in The Tim g en titTimeseem hate imptepetty appteptiatet l warding and passages p news etganizatiens tepetts the tiltquot Times in e t Mtheugh the Times deesn t step the P tepettet Zaehe t iteuwe is aeeusee et39 deing the Times s attentien by the Utah Stteet Jeutnat tepeatediy teejkteiee ianguage just TTT EE impettant quetatien maths et atttibutien in the wene te use iFet instance the Paper e El E1 eateh by The Tim ges in hit eh die net tutn A subsequent s etettap between passa etganizatiens T he seat attieies were inaeeutatejt Begging language diteetitt item ether ne t39aets ate indepen standards it sheuie net hate est Gentile testified is a set 39rte r Fired fer Plagiarisrtt es met the past treat anti in a Times tepettet appears te ubiis an I at et s nete teda were that39s essentia His thieving was 39tthieh netieed that Heuwe we die abate but which ate reality t t Resets aise tepetts es t39eune ether eases at test tileu39tte s artistes an up any indiestiens 39tt39s etganizatiens ttitheut standing atttibutie ieus ti tunes The mattet rem m L n ri m I ri I i I E I i r Hi I gt i 39q n H u 1 39 39E39LJEH iJ quotL39u Ezl i The Christian Science Monitor visited the HF eq D topic illicit drug quotpaooquot on April 5 2006 the 3 0 39 Miami Herald on Aug 12 2006 the Los i i 1 Angees Times on May 25 2007 and BBC News on Aug 29 2007 The New York Times39 contribution arrived on as Feb 23 and was published on Page One of f j the paper But not only does the Times piece Miquot a fail to advance the paoo story it plagiarizes i E two lines from the Herald i Compare the two articles Herad Paco is highly addictive because its effect is so short a couple of minutes and so intense that many users resort to smoking 20 to 50 cigarettes a day to try to make its effects linger NYT Paco is highly addictive because its high lasts just a few minutes and is so intense that many users smoke 20 to 50 paco cigarettes a day to try to make its effects linger Paco is even more toxic than crack cocaine because it is made mostly of solvents and chemicals like kerosene with just a dab of cocaine Argentine and Brazilian drug enforcement officials said NYT s Managing Editor Jill Abramson says that the piece39s author Alexei Barrionuevo concedes that he lifted the two passages Barrionuevo doesn39t specifically recall taking the lines from the Herald story says Abramson but he doesn39t dispute that it39s very likely his source was the newspaper t Did Barrionuevo commit plagiarism quotYesquot says Abramson quotI think when you take material almost wordforword and don39t credit it it isquot A News Fragram amused af Flagiariaing AC Newsquot Segment 7 Haw Eaalana39a Elaaa L palagiaaa I by Ew may El i iitl i Etirilw urrialismmi39sg July 25 332111 1225 Fll39Fi ESET iquot i jg i L 1 i 1 F HEW EeallairldE ElbaIE Mud nalizingin Euriiawewa fair tailciirlg quot39iinsipiira iam tun fair iirl quotIIrEMrEilraiiainiing139 i Hun ABE Emerita atmw redi z ElbaIE up agreemallhut i A Haw Eaa aiid dailyr riawa magiar has apmiagizad aiitai being accused di F agiaiiziiig a segment iidr EEC News iii i 39IIE HEW Eid di iz magni ed I 4 F g 39il Z iiia magiarm E daa Ham aired a Ja y M quotaagr aiii aiiaiyaiiig 3W3 iar39 i y a LEIEE di iaiaigii r39 ada Q dsu UL a Maw ii g Eaa aiid Haialld FEFFDH39iEi apm ad iiia magiar a aimiiai39iiiaa id a January aidw airad try iH39iE WEE riawa magiar m 39 n 39 i 4 J Wadd News wiiii Diana SEWER o More cases 0 9 Students sometimes get mixed up about what constitutes plagiarism but journalists should never let that happen They should understand that plagiarism is one of the worst things they can do and they should know how to avoid it When material is used in a story from sources other than the writer39s own reporting those sources other publications radio or TV newscasts etc should be l indicated in the story That attribution need not be made for simple verifiable 3 facts like dates but is essential for information that goes r beyond simple factquotations or descriptions not heard or seen by the current reporter characterisations or other generalisations not based on the writer39s own reporting 9 Using someone else39s work without attribution whether deliberately or thoughtlessly is a serious ethical breach You should be alert to the potential for even small unintentional acts of plagiarism especially in the reporting of complicated stories involving many sources 44 A ATrr g 1 A A 44 IS Ii Borrowing ideas from elsewhere however is considered fair journalistic practice Problems arise in the grey areas between the acceptable borrowing of inspiration and the unacceptable stealing of another39s work Words directly quoted from sources other than the writer39s own reporting should be attributed That may mean saying the material came from a Straits Times report from a television interview from a magazine or book SM o You will fail this module if you are caught for plagiarism Students have failed this module for plagiarism Yes media students at NYP o Do your own reporting o Attribution o Don t Cut amp Paste 1 Is JOURNALISM 9 Journalism is a profession of gathering and disseminating information It is the practice of reporting and commenting on events and is a set of working practices 9 The cub reporter the columnist the subeditor the film reVIewer and the foreign correspondent in a war zone are all Journalists 9 Journalism is an open profession anyone can be a JournalistIWIthout undergomg any rigorous academic certification or any credentials 1s A JounNAus39r 9 Someone who tells the truth and records history 9 Someone who goes into the external real world w finds out what s going on does empirical in investigation amp tries to report as objectively anoI as truthfully as possible 9 Someone who is an information worker gathering information and reports 1s A JoUnNAUST 9 Someone who is a historian researcher entertainer explainer and problem solver 9 Someone who is an intermediary between people who want to know and the sources of information JOURNALISM 8 ATTR urns 9 Communication skills listening interviewing o Aquestioning curious and inquisitive mind o Writing and language abilities o News sense 9 General knowledge 9 Empathy patience and understanding o What are the responsibilities of journalism 9 To whom Emp oyett Readers hd Beets Sootety Se SENSATIONAL JOURNALISM 0 Sensationalism is a manner of overhyping events being deliberately oontroversiall loud selfcentred or acting to obtain attention 0 One goal of sensational reporting is increased or sustained viewership or readership which can be sold to advertisers TAPE DUIHGHEHDIN g i i a a i y b il h mm ii 4 OBJECTIVE JOURNALISM Characterised by 3 aims 1 2 Separating fact from opinion Presenting an emotionally detached view of the news Striving for fairness and balance giving both sides an opportunity to reply in a way that provides full info to the audience TODAY S MODERN A 38 MEDIA INDUSTRY This is a Changing Industry 1 The technology is changing 2 Demographic compositions of consumers are changing Consumer tastes are changing The regulations of operations are changing NEWSPAPER o Writing for newspapers is exciting amp tough o The hours are odd 0 The pressure is severe o No story is definitive 0 Many stories deal with human suffering and conflicts But 0 It is seldom dull o It is not routine 0 A great sense of accomplishment w x S SERVIC 9 There are more than 100 accredited foreign correspondents from more than 60 news agencies newspapers broadcasters Major news agencies United Press International UPI Agence FrancePresse AFP Associated Press AP Xinhua Bernama Antara 9 Most international agencies hire stringers part time correspondents 9 Solid news skills and versatility are essential 8 0 There are more than 30 local and 40 foreign magazine titles in S pore dominated by SPH amp MPH o Magazine writers have more time to explore a subject because the deadline pressure is different from that at a newspaper or broadcast station o Because a magazine story can be more indepth there is a wide range of things a writer can do However the content will not be uptodate 9 TV has the advantage of bringing news as it is happening to living rooms round the world However it is not as indepth as newspapers o The trend is towards localisation as well as maintaining a globalregional presence 9 Some foreign broadcasters which have set bases in S pore include HBO ESPN STAR Sports MTV CNBC o The newspaper reporter must wait for the next day s edition before his report appears The TV reporter must consider the visuals of the story and weigh the importance of breaking into regular programming But a radio reporter at an accident site can go onair immediately It is an immediate medium 39 0 But radio news has limited time on the air Stories must be condensed into headlines 2060 seconds and must be able to write for the ears E g 39IIJ quot quotFra iii 19 g 39 F When a news story breaks reporters are expected to file the story immediately for the web and update the story online throughout the day Online news often feature polls chats and questions to prompt readers to express their views or i contribute their personal stories l Online news is accompanied by links to related information thus intensified research and reporting Because online news features links and multimedia features it creates a nonlinear environment meaning readers may access content in any order THE NEWSROOM PEOPLE 9 Managing Editor 9 SubEditors 9 Sports Editors o Lifestyle Editors 9 Business Editors o Photo Editors 9 Graphics Editors D x if 39 have what it takes to be a Reporter sa F 71 E i j 39 7 1quot V r V in I n r j 1 IF r d 3 r B r 39 E f s r If r I y W F a 39 V 39 quot39 I V n F I In I r I m r 4 quot j P a n quot r E If E 7 7 m If v l l 39 F i if I 39 439 r1 5 F F 39 r r 39 p quot P39 39 quott r r u Ir 7 r39 A L 39139 a r r i r r F a I r r r r r p p F J 3 IF I v y r q 7 u 7 57 3977F7 7 quot l 3 7 7 7m7 7 7 quot 7 7 7 7 7 IE7 737 7 i H 7 7 7 7 139 quotl H d a 7 W343 f W343 53 Hay RV Vimva VVCg 5 T x Vimg 53 as3 1 x 5 7 HR 113 53 lgl lj MW in ate Hi gm Migrate at ML Lotl QU Q K19 il l tg L 0 kg at kg l Hula 7 EU UK at a W7 7 7 7 7 7 a 7 Q s m s 7 7f W Eri n r 31 77 I 3 1 77 J M 77 c l Q r l 393 l Magale res Sth lotus leadet D execHe g pits iii wow of M digD l m technologically skilled enough to shoot video download files from the Web post photos online etc I can organise my ideas and write quickly when l needto I d make a good game show contestant because I m good at remembering facts and trivia I m efficient and selfsufficient when it comes to doing tedious library or internet research Every journalist is expected to be computer savvy The more versatile you are the more successfully you ll be able to adapt and evolve Score 1 pt for YES Newsroom is like an assembly line where workers race the clock to produce a new product each day Score 3 pts for YES Journalism isn t just about writing it s about gathering and processing lots of information Score 2 pts for YES If you become a reporter you ll be spending years of your life doing detective work searching for files and data Score 2 pts for In public situations I m pretty shy I avoid asking questions in class for instance I think it s unpatriotic to dispute or criticise government officials If I really want something I m tenacious until I get it When I m under pressure ll m able to stay calm and focused without losing my temper Whenever people criticise what I say or do it really annoys me Who do these people think they are Reporters need to be bold aggressive sometimes even fearlless Score 2 pts for NO l t s nice to respect authority but if you re a journalist it s better to be skeptical Score 1 pt for NO If you lack patience and persistence your reporting career could be very shortlived Score 3 pts for YES Journalism is a constant battle against the clock You need quick wits and grace under pressure Score 1 t for YES Being a reporter means rewriting stories to make editors happy and being polite when readers call you a moron You ll need patience and a thick skin to survive Score 2 pts for NO o 30 points Congratulations You were destined to be a journalist Or else you lied which is a heinous thing for a reporter to do o 25 29 points You re a solid contender for a journalism career You ve got the personality and ability P a good reporter needs l o 20 24 points Reporting is a good fit for you mostly but it may require you to Change your attitude or improve some skills o lt 20 points There s a strong possibility you won t be happy working in a newsroom i 39v a r P all r F39ui 393 L tquot J a 9 a I I i 5 2 r F p quota H r 4 3quotui r J 15213352 wgm y Emma I39CIEIW39iih39Il Emula ui ll nigl39i FiIJilii IEIE IIIuifl 5 ilrlliFelw i lluillnlj mllilg39JIH Hquot EHILFLIHIEEEE II zilfal I lllfl 39 l l lll II5IIIIIFIII Il f39irxznln i39 LEDquot jl lmw germ up 1 11mm A I wd QUEER 39 n 39 39 L V i Hung Ila 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The Starf The g year eld man whe eame baekte life a ter being dead fer twe and a hal f heurs en Thursday in what is believed te be the first ef its leind in Malaysia is in stable eenditien Hg Shame Hee39k hewever is still uneenseieus at the eritieal eare unit CCU ef le Seberang J aya Hespital here quot39Aeeerding te the state Health Department the patient is still en a ventilater machine at the CCU Penang executive eeuneiller Phee Been Peh whe heads le state Health welfare Caring EleeietjgI and Ensirenment eemmittee said Hg had stepped breathing at his heme in Jalan Tell Eleng Tanah Liat in Euleit Mertajiam and was preneuneed dead by deeters at the Seberang Japa Hespital a ter he was admitted there at abeut 11am It was reperted lat altheugh deeters did a CPR en him fer 45 minutes he did net respend Hewes39er Hg started te brea le again tweanda hal39f heurs a ter being preneuneed dead Hespital direeter Dir Su kumar Mahesan said an independent beard ef inlrljuirjgr inte le ease feund it te be eensistent the Lazarus phenemenen a spentaneeus return ef eireulatien a ter failed attempts at resuseitatien eeurrenees ef le syndreme are rare and le causes are net well understeed There are enly 33 eases in idle werld up te June seep Keep mine and emw an August EIIIJ 2D11 1038pm Ely Uliuia He le at Friday nearly SEJEIIIIEI neenle had indicated an Faeeheelc that they will he epidng up their Sunday with turmeric cumin and a deed deee ef are eld kamneng spirit ha melting and sharing curry with friends and neighheure The Faeeheelc event quotCEIIIIk and Share n F39et ef Curryquot wae created in light at a media renert en hew a mainland Chineee family eeuld net etand the emell at their Ideal Indian neighhedre eeelting curry Nltl tEeeatae Ethereal Fantr IFira Time In aea 39 71 I ve a m 4 Party at Ultjmea eameelle E amateur gamut F 2332 5 mar 1 at til arrl Enema nearst FT Fame Fr Eminent at ntcra T ea Kent team qu ln l 39l F39Q 39li L513 THEE M 335quot It 535 t E n Snare EHJMEJE eha l i 7 It WLtjlitll If IFI IE39IEIE Illa fliEI 39i i1 WEE El SHEHEAT 9 3 3 a party that was te he held at Ehijtntea aha tH39hieh rilea the Eathelie eetmtmunity has been eaneellea a I after the management at Ehijtrhea steelJena in yeater ay t Perennial Retail futlanage tF I39IEI IL whieh manages CHijttT IES tela the tIT IE ia that it Strangle aiaapnrettea a r 3 quot 439 t the heating at any event at Ehijtrheathat aiereeneete religiena taitha aha raeee 39 1 EEtEJ r n a iiiquot Like i September 13 2011 12IZIEen1 Ei39y39 Pearly Tan l l i i i l P i r I1 names Shin Him I n THE TWD neighbdurs gdt gifts a good st39ertr with dne buying snacks for the ether r r while on a holidayquot and the ether helpfully reminding her neighbour when she left E T her house keys in the door luck 539 E g I in But after a misunderstanding during the Chinese New r eer period last year their E f f f quot r Rhquot iv39 relationship sdured and en Sept 10 the twd women get into a ght 5 I r 33 T7quot 1 r latestsin like 39 1 China Eliohurm eru thquslte Body of 111other sheltering eluld fotmd tmder rubble The bodF of a mother Sheltering her dead child has emerged from beneath the rubble of a house destroyed in Saturday39s Siohuan earthquake China News s World News s Asia s IN CHINA i d I i I itquot c 1 1 l r i a pm Siohuan where more than T SJZIIZIIZI people died in a muoh larger earthquake in Mav is looated in southwest IChina near the Tibetan plateau Photo Jutlelll asossws My 123EF39I U1 EIST IE Esp EDDE China minibus oarries trapped survivors three days afterthe quake which Killed at least 38 as ohildren people in the province Rescue workers are still digging through the debris in a frantic search for Sichuan where more than TELIZIIZIEI people died in a much larger earthquake in May is located in southwest China nearthe Tibetan plateau BLIHZI39H39 SEWER DEFWIH FALL Deyeted mum had adjustment wees l She Ep k rarely te neighbeure deepite being here fer a decade t HH H F I H J 3 r 513 i39aquot 3 rd 5 192 r Dr Eae Iiiiaerail12r the I lueljaruelr giyee yent te hie grief at the feet ef the blecli a er pelice rerrleyed the I bediee Iaet Friday ST PHDT D DESMPDFJD LIquotr 1 7 THE Shangha hdm heueew te when te te her death with her ydturnd daughter Err Etuh t Bateh ensuehe I rare y tel herghhdture hut wee a deydted raretheru 1 3 Fewer herdhhdture narrated th e p rthre dt d year e d He Euej rrdr whd had ta ern hem the hedrddrh windew dt her tEth ethrey exertutflye at eet Frniday mittminer w th her h he year d d y daughter Bae Pe d rr rn teen 7 ISMO39I3910NS Jun 3 201i Slpereane bid Tanjen Pagal39 Railway Statie farewell g i 39 P Ir F r 39 Eli quotis til k i s 39 39 Elma MI 39 3939r a Iincwds thrcnged the inside cf the KTM Tanjcng Pagar Keratapi Tanah Melayu railway staticn which will be clcsing fcr gccd cn 3 June 2011 ST PHOTO FiLF39HDNSLIS CHERN l39391R SH lMSUL Eahari became acmewhat cf a celebrity cn Thureday eyening a5 hundrede cf yieitcre Swambed the Tanjcng Pager Railway Staticn cn ite Iaet day cf cberaticne The StEItlIZIl39I manager 43 whc39e wcrked at the StEItlIZIl39I Sll IEE 1996 wee Signing autcgrabhe fer the pebble whc came up tc him bearing ScLJyenirS frcm ccffee muge tc PVC fcldere with imagee cf the Staticn imprinted cn them 39Muet be mcre than 1IIIIIIIII becble already Sll IEE thie mcrning39l39391r Eahari Said Smiling 39Nc my hande net tired yet rcund the StEItlIZIl39I Shutterbuge Scattered themeelyee adding tc the Senee cf cccaeicn bulbe flaehing at eyery ccrner cf the FQ year cld KTM Railway Staticnl39391u5ic blared thrcugh StEl EDS brcught by yieitcre necke craned behind ircn grillee that Separated the ticketing bccth frcm the train blatfcrm5r1n Friday the land cn which the StEItlIZIl39I SltS will reyert tc Singabcre Newspaper 1 Use at own pace 2 More depth 3 Repeated reading ded attention Ni 4 Und 5 Conven t Ien 0 MEI N Radio 1 Allows multitasking 2 Portability 3 Timeliness 4 Offers few details opinion and analysis are rare 1 u MEI Television 1 9190053 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for eight months on Monday Khoo Wei Chyi 33 was also fined 3800 and banned from driving for 15 years after pleading guilty to five charges The Straits Times 21 April 2009 SINCE 1 Basic news leads Immediate identification lead MediaCorp Radio s CIassQ5 DJ Glenn Ong 39 announced in a brief statement at 830 am during 5 quot his morning radio show Morning Express on 39 Friday the 13th that he and wife Jamie Yeo have gone their separate ways The Straits Times 16 Feb 2009 2 39 S 3 8mm 2 Anecdotalnarrative leads Have a beginning middle and end Will be ministory with symbolic L resonance for bigger story About five years ago architect Jimmy Lim was reading the newspaper when he heard his son crying in the next room When he rushed in to see what happened to the four yearold he was r um V 391 I i Ir ii I 5 E I a r p quot F 1 Tau F 39LIr Ej39ri 3 3 i gt n A H r If i FliuinTgif39hgrl I quotF Lquot p I 39quotII Hiai l39iiigtl rs SINCE 3 Scenesetter leads Lack urgency of hardnews leads Borrowed from 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Context Reader discovers more points of view H NI NG AN USI N6 SOURCE o Attribute Anonymous source Identifies where an Some sources are idea comes from reluctant to be named Shows reader you because they re afraid are reporting what s they ll be embarrassed been said not attacked or even arrested saying it yourself Granting anonymity may President Smith be only way to get said the war is 3 information bUt Can rack655 mistake undermine your credibility Source reliability Be wary of every source i e Fl NI NG AN USI N6 SOURCE The Wide World Of Sources Newsmakers Spokespeople Experts Official records Reference material Ordinary folks NEWSlVIAIKER These are the people who willingly or not take part in news events the firefighter who battles the blaze the player who scores the big goal Their recollections Opinions and emotions validate stories and give them life Who wants to read about a dramatic rescue without hearing from the hero SPOKEPERSON Who speaks for institutions big corporations or public agencies like the police or fire department Usually one person or office is responsible for disseminating information to the media This helps streamline the process and eliminate confusion but it also gives those organisations more opportunity to control the story BQPERTS Whatever the t0pio you can usually seek out an expert a professor an author a government official to provide analysis or Opinion Not all experts have officialsounding credentials a legendary looal poker player for example but that s ok as long as their insights are reliable and relevant to your topic All institutions collect and store massive amounts of information In most cases all you have to do is ask or know where to look for and you can unearth helpful statistics reports court records etc Private companies are often secretive but most public records are available REFEREVCEMATERIAL Before the internet came along most research relied on printed material But nowadays it s faster and more efficient to search encyclopedias dictionaries and phone books online Not every source in every story must be an authority with an official sounding title Sometimes you want to hear the opinions or anecdotes of the man on the street USI NG THE NTERNEI39 A Researcher s Dream Come True BUT You can t always trust what you find It is no substitute for reality Do some real reporting i r Br of 0 es es en r w Y e Q TAKING NOT E Good Notetaking Isn t Easy o Involves multitasking If you re not careful Listening I your notebook can Interpreting become confusing Observing chaotic mess need a system to guarantee 39 EValuat39ng that what you report l Writing matches the data your source gave you i Thinking INTERVI EWING Interviews Come In All Shapes Sizes Long formal sit down in a room Quick phone Walkaround accompany your interviewee as heshe does the newsworthy thing you re writing about Onthefly chat you fire off questions as newsmaker whisk through a public place mg I neatune your phras In the more you 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facts and figures r stories 15 i q g F e a o m w m a w u w w m m S m m m 0 B a d w r e m a am 0 q w 93 a S a p S e V p e C a m 0 e u I r w e e m P m W U 9 W S w 9 TI S 3 H e S e t S e m D mum In A 4 2 MOTIVATICNOFINTERVIENE Why would anyone talk to a reporter 1 Professional obligation It is their job to do so being the corporate communications person Personal or professional gain These interviewees agree to be interviewed to promote themselves or their organisations Inadvertent entry into the public eye They could be witnesses to an accident STRUCTUREOF AN IINTERVI EW How an interview will be structured and carried out depends on 1 The intended use of the interview 2 The availability of the subject 3 The cooperation of the subject Inve 3 Thetunnel APPROACHES TO I NTERVI EWS The funnel approach 1 A way of ordering questions where general questions are asked before specific ques ons This is most common of all question sequences Use it when interviewee knows the topic well and feels free to talk about it APPROACHES TO I NTERVI EWS The inverted funnel 1 A way of ordering questions where specific questions are asked before general questions 2 Effective when interviewee needs help remembering something or to motivate an interviewee to talk APPROACHES TO I NTERVI EWS Thetunnel 1 All questions have the same degree of openness 2 Also called string of beads it allows for little probing and variation in question structure 3 Useful for simple surface information interviews but not for indepth interviews THE LAYERS 0F TRUT39IH 1 At the first level the journalist writes the report based on the information given 2 At the second level the reporter verifies material and checks with other sources 3 At the third level the analytical and interpretation of information level INTERVI EWI NG Strive for racial and gender balance Connect with all your readers Vary ages genders races and lifestyles of people you interview m r 4 a V I l In a w a u r A w r p r ma r If m H an p I r n w L s l 2 m a aa 7 a 1 a J m n n r 1 t p 7 7 F I a i r m u u r a F a L i y I F a a n i 3 a g a W n x in A an a A F F a m J a in m l I i l r 4 a f E a aquot T A in T a m P m H a f L n a a i a 1 a F r a ii In at t39 canno nform e 1 any an 39a ted m I p rm n f r INTERVI EWING Oneonone Is Not The Only Option 0 Many interviewers one interviewee Formal news conference 0 Many interviewers many interviewees w 39 Media gathering at trade shows quot quot 0 One interviewer many interviewees talking to a crowd rock group QUOTATI ONS Real Words Give Stories Personality But be careful Because people lie o And exaggerate o And fudge facts People yammer And stammer And ramble O O QUOTATI ONS How To Use Quotes In A Story 0 Direct quote Partial quote 0 Use when speaker s Use when quote is entire sentence tOO long or presents ideas in awkward relevant concise way 39J Without a doubt we ve 39 ABC capta quot Bruce J 39 5 got the biggest fastest Lee Cal s quotquot5 ea 5 if best team in the league ABC eam the has this 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For Those Changed WithA Crime cAeE Film ned fer e6 HIP Indie et when etelle f r kettles ef perfume tee le 2M frem eet en Teeedey wee ned Maggie 3e eeee J a a I befeee putting the beetle Aiagll stole eif ieeie jeene eeket He did the eeme eeether eel eeee ty effieer detained eeteide the Seed Reed eit39eire He wee famed ite have etellle few I w e w pm E lt eeid he regretted what he I x heee been jailed fer u be ii math f She of hiding baby s birth gettin rid f ha y y a aayaareald waaaaa was Chargad yaaaar day a hag af hEI aaad by aaaaatlydlaaih af aa bawdy an the War an ar aaaaa m I ii at 155m ghalaa aha a a quot39 was calm v a al a m 39 a m a aa charge was aaadh Sha is anamp layaa 0a Friday mamiag a tachaiaiaa ahaajlaag utilth aaatar Iaadlags aaaahia a at Black aaaa J aaaag datactad when apaa mar af alaaa aanlea ahaa by washing aside aaaa was a recycling HE Mt W SPWHS and aaartaataa the ptha at 1459111 I 1 r l in a a 39 L l7 2395 I I mama ha the diaaaaaw ah the head baby and the af Pahaa said aha mg the had hat haaa aaamaaa la aaa h aaaaaaday Nara searching Eaaaa in arawd hat ha mamhaaa af her family aaaaaaa an ha aaaaaaa l aria ha at tha Institute af Mental ha ahaahrahaa and appear ha marl ah 20 7 h aaaad hf aislpaiag af ath aha was ahfhhaaa aa died wing at aha aaalld ha jailed far up hr Tea re agjW Sentences aside alter deuhts surface ever key tardiness lienesty Br Veteran LAW CORRESPONDENT men eenricted and sentenced te re reenthsquot jail and six shaker at the cane each were set has an Mendel after denhts surtaeed near the truthfulness letquot the trier witness in the case r l t l r r ti H Thegr were cenricted in April that great fer dating in a beer shep in Littte indie iurer The trie Mr 8 ltaruesh 3739s Mr T Rain and Mr P hasha hath 312 are alse Indian uatienals whe werked in the censtructien when the were cen ric ted last year District tudge Shaittndin Saruwan had re lied swatchr en the residence at the hey wit nessi Mr P Gerindaraji w hese statement was made eat at ceurt The judge did so since the victim did net Eire anr evidence the trial cenld net he centacted after he had re turned te indie But after the trial new evidence emcee ered he twee let the Inertia tawrers Mr is Jerapalan and Mr hairssh Vase shewed that Mr Gerindarai a class relatiem ship with the rictirn He had lrnewn the victim far up te feur menths hietare the incident and had ence steed hail fer him in little The etc the had she helped Gerindaraj te wash dishes at the Maggi Beer Garden in Little India where the latter werhed and where the fracas ecenrred The defence appealed tn the High Cenrtr which erdered the lewer eeurt te hear the fresh evidence and recensider its decisien I 39quotL During this secend trial hetere district Linden Shai ffudin again the defense law argued that the new iacts shewed a v r Gerindarai knew therietim res well cuenahquot His status as an in 39 dent witness was he lenger certain e indies agreed that the duh had a re ship which went heyend merely quotnuwing each ether sight it is new plain that Mr Geeindarait was net an independent ndtness whe had atrselutety39 an agenda te lie was my raisen d etre fer my earlier greends at de cisien said District Judge Shairfedin It was theretere unsafe ta hang the ceneictient en Mr Gerindarai s evidence The judge had us pewers te alter presi eus judgment as the High Cenrt had It t r itnhhdl T dais Melt and hit IS ware in April that year hr THE S l itti lfs THURSDAY Mt deities has their diamante jail and caring sentences aside an header ST rare as Edit was set aside the cenrictien when it asked ter the case te he revheard Bnt en Mandate testicle Tart Yang Kwang erdered the eeneictiens and sen tences in he set aside and the three re leased after he had read the district judge39s findings and heard defence taw recs lerapaian Vase and Vitae Khmer lr and Danishr Public Presecnter Lee lwee Lawyers said it was serge rare tar a case in he sneeesstulh turned en trash cri dence allewed by the ceurt The three Indian natienals said yester day they were reliered that their 23month erdeal had ended What his April Edd Charge a can aces Centric 3t ntenthstI jail at 39 cane he a district deteber ZINE App 3 F High Desert Rehf 39 erdered ter fresh 39 henamher Edith Dr evidence and ruler unsarie Marchd dd High t sentence and can if 39 l j 7 T Friends and eh I I die had raised en E duce the time th 5 r 1 mend All three it light heart I l V quotlint gating has married seine r wrwd twdeddweiwwuweel meg tddiw RECKLESS Ah pawnES inf man k u t when hit ther EDIE theHawtiterhaj ihgh hetg1Lh12rLirharid The iiharitiaada iaertrtied rd hidrit the L t 1 u hut ha 7 Mr Lirh Qui it39ng and hid e Tart he wie did hdttaiit td reperterd tatti when hit Lee tred td drwe dii quot 31 Er am quotm agree 39 394 dang hit Lee s lawyer hi hi haiarh atet tdd 1M7Tdalj fht pj hirLeearreietaded fruit were at a hhdLi t aiter their Zi jiriEEIIIjhj add ded when he repdttets that dth harried agreed td a SET and htahed sadderth raudihg hit Lint td iai n W35 HUI dii the Id and hit his head eh tiehteht di 515dth arid the triddezir wii I a i a a r the grdhdd he paid t hit Lee39s htdteit ineurer Thhiei hit Lht Slipped me a edhta and died The ease was ddppdsed td he heard in Marine a triddth later THE pare HIE di iihadea ada ieer diets lht tillfTEiriESI EIiih hut after deathr twn h IJIS haunted 15 Iiildwae ad ahdrt rafter hit lee whd was 5e we need td a death whd died after heihg ung hit the hdh d Jude Lee Eeu Erin s eharrihers in the i LL It het di a tatei aidri trierriihg the rduhie and the rahr agreed hit int and hit Lee EEL get tit rt term39ihedrwetdihdeearehaeaedeett 1 a a e e a dh the settierhehd I quotn H v u t hariheditdrhdrwihgidrlie he the detrrt E iihhhh in a rite suit against the eahhzir Emergrig hunt the rdurttderri wth thiiddh ehhrdtte RUM redrt f THUEEEA I llLLIL Iquot lo nooiEi T i f AME M ELID MURDER had led Qltice remit earlier Friends claim laucinriendr who will he charged 39toislsyr wasjeslous and aggressive Leone wee near weeksriferrredin rorprornsg n39ionths hefore she was murdered his Jeevitha Fanittan had lodged a police report that she was the victim ofa sessual assault1 which also left her face lhadly llziruised The alleged attacker her friends told Took is now thezsuspect arrested in con nection with the lE vear old s n39iurder l39 r quot r39 77 l AKl wa ed verbally many times her friend Mr Pathilh Selvarrr Frien i wh knew the couple had desc rih Msjeevithak god brother Mrl39iarthige san t anamani alleged that on at least five occasions Mr Pathih had threatened her when she tried to end the relation ship quotWe thought these were only verbal threats Mr Harthigesan said Msjeevithas body was found out side a substation at Block 154 Eng Mo lilio five 5 on Tuesday at about l LlEIami illsg q 3 i hills J ees ithza39s body was discovered in a pool of bleed on Tuesday oe soot seeus Mr Fathiii1 22 had fled the country before the discovery but was arrested upon his retun39i at the Woodlands Checkpoint that evening He will he charged in court today for murder f convicted1 he faces the death penalty Mr Bala Suhramanaiam a friend of Mr Pathih told Tooter he had seen the lat ter in Eng I39Fil lo Kid on Monday evening Ficcor ding to Mr Bala El Mr Pathilh said he was going to meet Ms jeevitha at around 3pm1 and would call him alhout meeting up later that evening When Mr Bala called up at E s15pm Mr Pathih told him Don39tdisturh EFLE I39m with rriygir romancingquot Mr Bala tried to call again several times at around 11 pm but Mr Pathilhs phone was tumed off Said Mr Bala a full time National Serviceman who has known Mr Pathi h for five years He39s quite okay to other people but he39s not good to girlsI While some media reports said Mr l athi h had asked to marry Fillsleevitha when they met on Monday friends Tout spoke to said the couple had an on off relationship The relationship had seemed rosy at first but cracks appeared as Mr Pathih started to get possessive demanding to he told of her every move and olhjiecting to her talking to any n39ien Ms jeevitha often broke down emo tionally and tried a few times tobreak o with Mr F athih She eventually did not after Mr Pathi h threatened her1 said child hood friend and neighlhour Euresh Plait Two months ago1 Ms eevitha re turned home with hruises on her face after meeting MT Pathilh near Admiralty station iii police report was lodged hut Mr arthigesan and Mr Euresh said they did not know if any action was taken against him M39s J eevitha who worked part time as a nursery teacher while studying as a private student for her Ci levels was described as quiet and independent She was always helpful to even strangersfquot said Mr Eures h n 39ihuisdley July 1 e 2003 beyf endl ilegedl murderer was did 39 seed 2 the w be dimppedl the nextdi i l i ll 339 i i is g i I la quot 2 IF E 5 le 9 F in IF39 3 A I quot so a r I I lfilri 39 fl im qrlr fi rs a ms rfiqv a F If ri 39F a i f i I I39ll M i 39H39S E FRID 39JUL 39JllDEI T39EllEl 39 39 listed securities the rnselyes Tee w he IE39i Cesce in iiilarch err persenal reasensquot is lueity te haye es caped with a eutef ceurt settlernent fer he eeul haye been charged in ceurt and fined and jailed w ith a criminal eeny ictien hanging eyer his head The MS reeently earx plained that when deed ing whether te undertalee ciyil penalty enfereernent aetien er refer a rnatter te the Eernnaerscial Affairs Department fer scrirninal inyestigatien ittaires intecensidera tien the degree efserieusness efthe naiscenduct extent ef impart ef the naiscenduct en the rnatriret the need fer e eetiye detenence and ether releyant characteristics ef the case quot ZFer estarnple ntarlret lTl39ilSx cenduc t eases inyelying fraud er censpiracy breaches ef ether criminal law er multiple effenaces that caused significant market dis ruptien weuld generally be mere suitable fer presecutien uner the c rirninal regime the iiiAS added Tee is the first persen te be fined by the I39yi fer insider trading this year last yearthere were three eases inselying tetal fines ef saeepee Pathip wars net EEPFEEEEFTEEEL leer rdidi heerreer a plea in eeun39 ireI ivquotu Fens eyfriendi charged with murder THZE man accused ef irilling has been charged with rnuiet Fathin Eelyan Sugu ntaran yesterday ifl39l ri39lll39lg He is al leged 39te haye caused the death ef his girlfriend hisjeeyitha en a perimeter easement behind an 5E2i Pewert rid su bstatien ens pesite Bleclr 15d Fling Me iiie Ayenue 5 en htenday The murder was alleged te haye been cernrnitted between Bern and hiredere his jeeyithar a parttime nursery teacher w he was leelring ferward te taking her I3 IEyels was feund dead with irnife weunds en her neclr and per bedy Ten heurs later ZF a39thip s arrested at the W eedlands 39cirpeinit w hen he returned rn Malaysia after haying cressed eyer f rent Eingapere befere the alert was raised Heighbeu rs did net hear any centnaetien befere the alx leged killing but ME Jee39yitha was said te haye rnade a pelice repert twe nrlenths age against Fathip fer sexual assault Fathip clad in a bright blue feetball jersey did net enter a plea and was net represented lle will appear in eeurt netrt Thu rsday lf cenyicted ef murder he faces the death penm a lily n M5 lLiEllr hi E1 313 July l 2208 ll he end l i i i i i l l39 l i i l i F E if I a g a i 1 Fr r F s l a 139 i it k rli quotI 39i Fquot quot3 395 39i l 39EJu 39ml siir l rrlte r sftaareg 3r 1quot Fri74 Flquot 4 I 117 Drur i Fir sgii1 lvll e r Li 1 NAMES 0 Drop the honon c Mn MIS Mdm Ms when you link a job description ordesignation to a name fOI39 ISt reference 9 Prime MinisterIee Hsien Ioong subsequently M1 lee MP Iow lhia Kiang subsequently Mr Iow Ac torAdIian Pang subsequently Pang IectuIerEugene Pang subsequently Mr Pang 7L Slinre quot Feeeb lete uee re tell lfe etee th Tmelne pages Shirt FRAtt iISED KAFPJ Feehhhit hn iinursijjit Lintteilee i39Ettii39i39itIIEIj hrhtile hes inth interetitte higil serh 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Give him 254mm and he 11 take 16km 9 Use Commas With More Than 39Ihme And Six Digits Eg 1123 And 7567453 A FEW PRINCIPLES 9 The rules ofgrammarare important Standardisation allows us to communicate more effectively and e iciently Knowledge ofthose rules makes us a betterwriter39 We have more con dence in the way that we are saying things 9 People who work with the language people like you should care about it 6 The rules grammar spelling punctuation are dynamic ratherthan stagnant Ihey change often Knowing grammaris notjust knowing a set ofrules Rather itis understanding how the language works and how itis used 0 Knowledge Of Ihe Rules OfGrammar Punctuation Spelling And Style Are Importanth YourProfessionalReputation WRITING LEVES A ismainlytechnical getting words spelled correctly getting sentences complete getting commas in the rightplaces etc Itis simply applying the rules ofthe road 0 There s not much that is hard about this levelexcept that often we don t learn these things and apply them very well WRITING LEVES v has to do with how we use the language and demands an even higherlevel ofexpertise Ihe orderin which we put words the ability to recognise cliches bad syntax nonparallelstructures all ofthese are important forthe writerand demonstrate the writer s ability to use the language At Ieve12 we should begin to pay attention to E how we are using the language as well as how r we apply the technicalrules WRITING LEVES 399 Ievel3 is where we make judgements about ouruse ofthe language to present information and ideas clearly and e iciently Here we must pay attention to the concepts ofsequence logic transitions voice and development Ievel 3 makes great demands on ourintellect as we write But the truth is that when we write we must think on all three levels simultaneously Writing is a high orderintellectualactivity Itis akin to doing a complicated math problem e 39 n TIHETRUTH IS 6 The factremains however that no matter how good we are at Ievels 2 and 3 mustbe perfect at Ievell foranyone to pay attention to what we say 6 You may have important information or profound thoughts but ifyou misspell words and getcommas in the wrong place when you express them no one will believe you orrespectwhat you have to say RUNCN SEIITECEamp CGVI MAS SPIJ CE A runon sentence connects two complete se nte nc e s w1th no punc tuatlo n or cooIdmatmg conJunc tlo n NOT flhe compute rscreen began flashing it would notstop Ib pmperseparate two complete sentences within a sentence you should use a comma AND a coordinating conjunction such as and or but CORRK39Z flhe computerscreen began ashing and itwould notstop PRCNOUN ANTECEDEVT AGREEVI ET 0 lhismay be the mostcommonemorin writing because itisthe mostcommonermrinourspeaking We often use a pluralpmnoun to referto a singular antecedentin ourspeech 39lhisisacceptable when we speakbutitisn0t acceptable when we write r 0 Singularantecedentsrequixe singularpmnouns O CORRECT The High Court announced its decision today NOT lhe High Court announced theirdecision today 0 It s time to go 9 O ITS IT S Itisa singularpmnoun Its isthe possessive of it It s isa contraction for it is Its doesnotexist The bird bst some ofitsfeathers lhe rule ifyou can replace the word with F it is or it has use it s Otherwise it s always i 99 O m i h a a n w a m m 7 7 f L m m m E i 7 a l r 1 m n I rr h 7 w A a m rm r r r v f e 7 m w i SS nits f Mstm 1i 1 Ewesrm 9P u p in l 6 w 3 n m J r a F a i f g i llih FILE n is 9 1M a lua in r 1 IF I a e u a u 1 a I i pm 3 I quot P 9 Let s amt grand ndpa 32 I 9 Leit s eat m 9quot quot 39 9 Dam it V 0 Dmn I saw teacher whm gang 1 saw a teacher Who cares 9 A warm withmm her mam is naming 9 A Woman Withouther manisnothing 9 A woman Without herman isnothing 4 gt1 a r T i F 39 F a II quot a T I 5 I II I F F 39 up E F 1 39 F I p p a u i h f quot g l A i B39 a m a I E n 0 A panda walks into a caf He oIdeIs a sandwich eats it then draws a gun and pIoceedsto file it atthe otherpatrons 0 39Why asks the confused surviving waiter amidst the camage as the panda makes towaIds the exit 0 39lhe panda produces a badly punctuated wildlife manualand tosses it overhis Tm lll 39iu39l39a39u39 y lili nhla E i25EEaElIF I39 Sho Ider Ef39ua Ens Eff if r h In 0 39Well I39m a panda39 he says at the door I I 3 39Iook it up39 p jr 0 39lhe waitertums to the Ielevantently in the 1 manual and sure enough nds an explanation rr 39 39Pandala1ge blackandwhite bearlike mammal native to China Eats shoots and leaves QUOTATI N amp ATTRI BUTICN a Pay particularattention when you use a directquotation and attribution Ihat s something we do a lotofin media writing A comma should be inside the quotation maIkto separate the quote from the attribution asthe examplesbelow 6 CORREI39T Iran to the storage said a Afullstoppenod should notbe put after the word store tshou1d be acomma 6 N01 Iran to the store he said I Ms i w i ms amt pm ers fDCUJ S n MD y wr pmbdiegc 139 1 1 Iquot i pje DO Fam iarise yo urself with state srecords and laws Follow the money Study the budgetson yourbeat Callsourcesbackto verify facts Write foryo ur readers E NGA EAT DON T Gettoo cozy with sources Getused Wa ste so urc e s time with idle c hitc ha t Simply rrrirrric what yourpredecssors did d e k J re d P e O e 9 h p d b m e y m an m m c M H h V 0 m an e a W S H a E I l l l Nine people were rescued from the building The ElElC39s Jennifer Pak reports from Central Selangor Malaysian orphanage landslide kills Landslide buries 20 boys at Malaysian orphanage May 21 2IZI11 Eileen Ng Associated Press ii Remmmgnd lg Print El Recommend quot Twrcct 1 Share Email i A landslide buried so boys and four adults at a Malaysian orphanage Saturday where rescuers Dance said were digging by their hands in soil softened by the rains to find the missing police said 1 The bodies of five boys ages 3 to 1 have been Kuala LUI39I39IF39UF recovered Sis boys and a 30yearold warden who were criticallyr injured were pulled from the mud and rushed to a hospital district police chief Abdul Rashid Wahab said l i Lndslide buries Mlaysi rphnge iPrintl El l iall Saturday 21my2011 056 Elii Share Link 39 cl 24 at are been killed an Cir iulalaysian police said fil l mi E5 of I Eff Lil en in Malaysia after a i i l l hers buried mostly childr 1 ktleastsik people quoti i r i i 39 39 39 hanage landslide hit their orp I I rday at about 230pm 0631 GMT in the yilla nttook plate 3 Sam is Lumpur The incidE St S um nithe capital kiua central Selangor state iu ge ofHulu Lsntiai in Postedi 21May EDM 18D hrs El 11 people recommend this Police inlylalaysiasay two landslides iisys partially buried an orphanage nearthe capital kiuala Lumpur killing 15 people 15 of them children KUALA LLIMPLIR i5 landslide caused by heayy rains hit an orphanage in Malaysia on Saturday killing fiye children and burying at least 1 other peopleJ a local lawmaker and The incident took place at around 230pm DESI ISM39I39J 230pm Singapore time at the Children39s Hidayah Madrasah iiilTaciwa orphanage in Hulu LangatJ just south of the capital Fire department deputy director Morni Mamet said 24 people 2 children and four adult caretakers were buried when the landslide struck Photos 1 Killed in Landslides at Malaysian Orphanage Published May 21 2I2I11 ssociated Press PI int Email a Shale iliominems l39liil El Recommend quot39 58 quot Twc or l 3 i landslides that hit a Malaysian said Sunday aged 8 to 1B and a 34yearold 39 orphanage killed 15 boys and one adult I but nine other people suryiyed police District police chief Abdul Rashid Wahab said the bodies of15 boys 5 caretaker had been recoyered Siii boys L 1 ii and three wardens who were critically 1 393 I F mm P 0 Ne ACCI DENTS amp LI SASTERS Writing Stories On 39llaf c Accidents 39 Usually lead with WHATorWHO 39 Use WHY only ifthe why is compelling signi cant orodd 39 Start with a delayedidenti cation lead 39 Delay naming Victims until 2 or393Id paragraph 39 Distribute key facts logically through rst few r w 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helld dewn a steady jelh a mae friend eaed Mani was ene ef tihese Madam Smaemeera ledu Eiaia turned te fer heipn EiJeeut tihree mentihs after she filled fer diyeree she deeided te marry Mani said her sister Madam Hatemth ihdui Eizia 41 But days after tihese pans tihe 32 year e d weman s ife ess hedy was feund at tihe feet ef an HEiE hlleek in Stir ing leeadu i 539quot F39ihetes in Wednesday Mdm Hatemafi testified tihat her sister39s 391usIand Mr Tharema ii39eiayan Geyindasamy 3399 en tria fer murdering her en iully 1 ast year was an alhusiye pessessiye and suspieieus ushandn Speaking tihreugh a quotIl39amill interpreter in eeurt she said tihe eeuplle s reiatiensfiip turned tumuitueus shertily a er tihe hirtih ef tiheir seeend ihid She reeeunted 39iew he had elejeeted te Mdm Smaemeerall deing tihe night squotii as a faetery werker heeause he suspeeted EquotIE was meeting etiher men Yet we had sept witih anetiher weman in tiheir at wlhiidh Mdm Smaemeerall diseey39ered and eenfided in her sister Slhe eeulld net teerate his terture anymerequot said Itiidm Hatemalh and added tihat fiirTfiarema had been assauting her sister frem tihe time tihey were dating Fiidm Smaemeerai weud ea e en erying and eempiaining tihat Hr39il39harema was beating 39ier heeause 39ie suspeeted 39ier ef haying an affair said Hdm Hatemalh wlhe deserileed new her sister turned up at her at enee witih 39 terrileie injuries Her faee was swellllen and tihere were hiue h aek and sap marks whidh fiidm Smaemeerai ted 1EF sister was a resut ef fiirTIharema 39ieiding 39ier dewn en a bed and pundhing her in tihe faeen F s39ildm Hatemaf39i said her famiiy was against tihe eeupie s marriage in EDDE heeause he was aleusiye and refused te eenyert te Iisiamn Ceurt deeLiments squotiewed tihat fiidm Smaemeerai had a F ersena P reteetien li39Ziirder issued te her in EDDE and Mr39il39lharema was jaiied ast year fer hreadhing tihe erdern During eress eiiaminatien defenee awyer Itiir Radakrislhnan elharged tihat fiidm Hatemalh was exaggerating and net teing tihe trutih te make fiirTfiarema eek leadquot heeause she did net ike him 39Il39f39ie awyer whe was assigned by tihe State added tihat IMdm Hatemafi was pertraying tihe aeeLised in the mest terriue igi39itfrr heeause she feit he had wreeked her reiatienship witih fidm Smaemeeralln The witness disagreed and tihe trial eentinues Thursday Heme a SING PUE neEy39e rgenquot eke te he hnge te step eth threte en fn39Iil5ir Eu 3939alarie Tan Channel HewsFusia F39ested 24 January 20073913953924 hrs Heeprnrnend SINGFiF CJFtE The man whp is en trial fpr Iaiing a nighteluh pwner in Serangppn has as ed the judge fer the death sentenee Tan Cher JinJ whp39s heen nielnan1ed quot neEyed DragpnquotJ tpld the epurt his wife has been reeeiving death threats sinee the trial startedJ and as ed tp be hanged tp prevent his fEll39l39lll39 f frpn39l heing implieated Mere than lIII witnesses were ealled tp the stand tpdayJ ineluding fprensie psyehiatrist Dr Tpn39ln39lyr Tan Dr Tan said the alleged murderer suffered frpn39l reeurrent depressive disprderJ eharaeterised tn frustratipn and peer sleepJ but was pf a spund mind at the time pf the pffenee last February The hearing has been adjpurned ti WlpndayrJ 29th January CNFI fdt TRiiiL oi EX TAL CHIEF REN Ci HosPITAL cHiEF TRIAL OF EXREN Cl HOSPITAL CHIEF 1 r 39 REN CI HDSP39 I Aid V r TRIAL OF EX atmng E u 4 grglg jga39d thrill10h monk i Cgurt tam M a gudden Flay Ming Yi I saw nothing wrong with loan to side quot renov me i It was an unauthorised payment b ii Mmg Y39 far 93 me The Straits Times b i Pleaquot5 THE personal assistant r t I 3 Apr Z g Buddhist monk Ming quoti i mass an 24 Apr 2009 Australian CltlZE h without a BUDDHIST monk Min Yi permit to work here a yesterday said he thought it was all right for Ren Ci Hospital to lend money to its affiliate Mandala Buddhist Cultural Centre so that it could in turn lend money to his former personal aide Raymond Yeung THE criminal trial of former Ren Ci Hospital chief Eiut Raymijnd YE Ming vi and his former quot9 Cl Hang Elgiaae ngapore permanent e l 3 ill drew a sala fr V I om Citlespltal where hiaaboss ie executive 39 a airman officer and personal aide opened yesterday and a 50000 W cheque quickly became its focus After all said the former chief of the medical charity Yeung was in substance a hen Ci explanations about the sou ht Mama had a a 5 a court was told cheque several time i iistrict Beur t h 1 yesterday an l l eard yesterday 1 every tll hE the answer Came 4 STEEung39s page would be employee and was in charge of led by the than managing Mandala a shop DECK d erenw d salary and the mug533 selling Buddhist artefacts Opening its case against Ming n didsatijanan l 1 mass Young whatwas due l Even if the money had gone Raymond reung Cm Hal 339 3a39 an t t 39 straight from Ren Ci to Yeung it L 39 39 re ermanent VESlden y i would have been fine by him tizen and SingapD i3 2 also i P l m 39 r 39 said it would prove FEW E39dlECl wigStigma 39 too said Ming Yi i yesterday the Pmsewmn as both men 394 wind vi A new a 3 39 l i hat the 50000 was not a l ah lRi Hospital He was on the stand for a third r i 39 a The ea answering queatiana abaUt Ming r39i getting outofacaratthe coHe saidtodaythathe y x 39 39 a 50000 loan that is at the thou l39rlit was alri l39rttolend mone to his aide TRIAL OF EX39REN 39339 HOSPITAL CHIEF Re Ci trial chases with claims rebuttals oftnecriminaltrial against a a y i i Ming w alde39 39 Min Yi admits cover u 39 39 Jane g a MOM officials deny adinsing Ming Yi In 2001 to exploit loophole to Sat Nov 21 2009 d l L 39 hire aide F I l quot From The Straits Times Home eraienmes a high living Buddh39 all a39m39fquote d Emaiammd l s is i V ll 15 J 2009 4 August 2009 was gamma jailed rgafgkmwmkran one of Clingaporei l 39 i 39 I a Untg a Singt 3 J I 5quot Shl Ming 4 we h I for fraud court of cials 25758 known charities I m F The 24day criminal trial against Ren Ci ConSl Jiring withjh a andE d the senten I ormer hen Ci CEO and U is persor a39 ce after he m founder Ming Yi and his former personal Ut MW 000 5 a39dE39 Raymg d g Convicted l in chairman Ming Yi admitted for quot aide WEth a close yesterday 39 39ngapore dollars n temp 34 to i ds39 month of 9 l a w 39 35300 C Edt the Pen r the first time in court on Vamp was senten 39 39quothar39tii m Thursdaythat he had heiped Both men were allowed by the courtto quot quot 7 7 39eilt me months for th 3 quot w K 739 perSDrlal aide Raymond Yeung travel tUl WUl39K but that have tCI be DECK a a a a quot quot 8 anma E v I l i Z cover up for an unauthorised fDrthE Verdi m Ba Emmer Home 5 a a a r SD39DDD l an39 Yesterdayiks proceedings centred n 39 M Y b d I mainly on the Buddhist monktas claim a quot a E quot 39 mg I 395 Bldg 333L153 D that the Ministry of Manpower MOM j 39 at a u i I a fDfeEWl3rD quotdme WEE Dr had advised him to hire Raymond Yeung V 39 quot i 39 39 Ming Yi39sjail term cut to E months after appeal r T a d quot misleading information t0 the by exploiting a loophole I an allegation I lay Slha iiqi dikhatii i Posted 2 May 2oio i523 hrs i Commiggigner gr Charitiegl which two MOM officials flatly denied on it In cons irac to falsi a a ment the Stand YESterdaV 39 J 7 39 Z N quot p a all a a Recommend tTw cot 0 13 u voucher and the misappropriation of Ren Ci funds Ming Yi told the court earlier that he took the MOM s advice as a goahead to hire Yeung who had failed to qualify for an employment pass SINGAPORE Celebrity monk and former CEO of Ren Ci HospitalJ Ming YiJ will serve six months in jail instead of ten months 7 V At the resumed trial the 39 i a Buddhist monk 4T t0ld the l l I court that Yeung had CDhtESSEd T r at J to him the real use of the loan His sentence was reduced after the High Court heard his appeal on Thursday 39 quot He said that at a meeting held eight Warsaw for lm to appeal agamat Eggcrug39f glars39Eaglig agfgve lathe But the appeal of his former aide Raymond Yeung against his sentence of nine months jail MOMaaS dac39s39m an MOM Dmcertald documentation and misappropriationoffunds The was dismiSSEd39 him that hiring Yeung should not be a trial centres on a 50000 loan made out in zoom i j P a WHICh Mmg YI had a Elmlg 5 problemquot if he paid the younger Mine Yi39STOWEF El 1 s Raymend YEUHQUEHJWhiCh 48 year old Ming Yi returned to the High Court on Thursday to hear the decision on his l e I 39 3 th ught was USEd m but wand quot mania salary out of his own pocket Lhn ap jlec g n rfgtis f EEIDEEFSESE Yeun appeal against his conviction and sentence a J 7 39 x for thE Mandala ElLJdthSt Ming Yi admied for the rst time in court on Thu is accus dinamdthem Phobia WONG g Ming YiJ whose real name is Goh Kah HengJ and Yeungy 35J were convicted last year of I a a a CUltural CEHtrE had helped personal aide Raymond Li eung coveri The monk added that thE thlCEl39 EVEh KWA39 CHOW ST faISIfylng Re CI payment VDUChers39 E a a I a anamaariaaa aaa39aaa Iaaa39 paintaa aat that as Yaaag was an The pair was involved in an unauthorised loan of 33550 000 made in 2004 to the Mandala e z i m quot 39 ST PHoTo wows kwisi cHow J f r a quot i F Yeun39g WHO was n0 lander auatrallan altlzan39 ha Baum Stay hare far three mamas at a Strata Buddhist Cultural Centre a religious artefact shop formerly managed by Young They were re FF 9 3 r gquot I 39Ii39Ii39IIIl39thg as thE lhdhh39S personal aldE In January last year and had l39EtUl39hEd tEI also found guilty of giving false information to the Commissioner of Charities isquot P 339 r a a h Hong Kong had called Ming ti to wish him happy birthday Liquot i d L f r a r 39 m m I j i r l LI 39 E a L 39 g a I 3quot i r L J a 9 g II n a P J i a a r n m 39iquot I 39a quot I 9 Speech Story Checklist Speaker sname Relevantcredentials Reason forspeech Time day and location Description of audience o NG SPEECHE V QuoteSkey points made by the speaker V Comments from the se in attendance V Responsesto remarks V Speaker sfee if ne wswo Ithy L39I a We 39 p 39 l quot 39 quot I m 5 v A 947 LA i p I r 7 WW 3947 A l a I eeNe 25 j Swearing in Speech Let39e Shape ur Future Tegether Mr Preeidentr 1 I F Friende and Eelleagueer if r d r 1 F I and my fellew SIngapereaner f i 1 I am deeply heneured te be ewern in ae the Prime Minieter e f Singaperen I am grateful fer yeur euppertr and will de my utmeet te r a E 3 eerye yeu and Singaperen Let me begin with a few werde in Malay and in Chineeen Englieh tranelatien ef Malay epeeeh E Tenight e eeeaeien belenge te all Singapereanen Threugh eur hard werlt and dedieatien we haye tegether built a eeheeiye and pregreeeiye natien that ie feunded en the pnneiplee ef meriteeraey eeeial juetiee and eempaeeienn We W l lI d hard te aehieye eur ehared dream e f a better future fer all Singapereanen ell eur eemmunitiee haye pregreeeedn We haye helped theee whe needed help 3 The truet that yeu haye placed in Mr Lee Huan few and Mr Geh Shela Teng whe haye beth dieeharged their reepeneibilitiee admirably ie new giyen te me I am humbled by thie heneur I will de my beet te riee te the ehallengen end ee I aelt yeu te werla with me te build a Singapere that will care fer all eur eitiaener edueate all eur ehildren wellr and giye eyerybedy full eppertunitiee te ful l their aepiratienen 4 The future helde many ehallengee and eppertunitieen We will talte the geed and the bad tegether and we will eueeeed ae a natien e yeur Prime Minieter I will werlt hard te aehieye what ie beet fer all Singapereanen Let ue ehape eur future tegether Englieh tranelatien e f Mandarin epeeeh 5 When Mr Geh Ch lt Teng aelted me te stand fer eleetiene in IEIIEEegF I wae reluctant I was then in the armyF eerying a5 a regular I wae a eingle parentr with twe yeung ehildrenn Entering pelitiee wae net in my mind But Mr Geh pereuaded me He hae guided me einee as a menter and a friendr fer which I am pereenally grateful E Tenightr I talte eyer ae Prime Minieter frem Mr Gehir I feel deeply heneured te talte en thie ehallenging reepeneibilityn Teday e Singapere ie different frem the ene which Mr Geh teela eyer in 199 when he beeame ane Minietern I will etriye te fulfil the aepiratiene e f eur new generatien t the eame timeF we will talte eare e f elder Singapereane whe helped te build teday e Singaperen SlH GAP RE NEWS u E I a m I 35 cl new abinet swrn in Exit a Sea Pzaue D a bemustmsj a 39 D ELVVI39L r rvf WEEEKTT WETEEMEW Eu 2 Equot E E v 39r EE lliii Ediii LLlETES WEEEKTV39TETEH SIHGQF ERE Singapere s new Cahinef has been swern inFIe effieelr wiFIh F rin ie Minisfer Lee Hsien Leeng pledging FIhaFI FIhe gevernrneni will evelve in fanden i wifh FIhe aspiraFIiens ef a new generaFIien ef Singapereans The swearingin eeren39ienv fer FIhe 15 Minisfers and iii Minisfers ef Sfafe feels place a FIhe Isfana en Safurdav Speaking ax FIhe swearingin uerernenvur PresidenFI S R Nafhan said The General Eleefien saw a full airing ef views n a wide range ef issues New is FIhe fin1e fer evervener wheFIher fren39i FIhe 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STOFll E lhere are 2 categories 1 News Features lhese are stories tied to the news ofthe day Frequently papers use these features as the humaninterest angle on the main news story and run them offto the side in the design ofthe page 2 Independent Features lhese are features that stand alone and is not tied to a news story lhese kind ofstories are usually found in specialsections eg Iife section Air A 4 4 4 4 A u l f I a n i 39 r II News Features The tutor who earned 520000 Rachel Scullyl Razothi lulon Sep 3 2010 Photo S39li39 iyir Phang Yu Hon 43 is proof that the tuition industry in Singapore is booming He is one of Singapore39s highest paid tutors with an average monthly salary of 43000 He was also featured on the Straits Times in 2003 as one of a few quotSuper Tutorsquot In an interview with the full time physics tutor the Straits Times39 RazorT y reported that last year alone he earned apout520000 after deduction of expenses and paid 35000 in tatres Mr Phang conducts group tuition 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seme unspeken rules en the usage ef gym equipment ancl hew te behaye while werking eut Gym users persenal trainers and fitness instructers giyes The Straits Times a runeewn en the werst secial blunders that peeple make at the gym 1 Leaving a trail ef sweet Chung Tze Knit 25 Geld39s Gym said that the biggest prehlem is that peeple clen39t wipe machines after they are clene with their werkeut It is alse unhygienic Seme gyms effer disinfecting wipes Otherwise use a tewel te clean the equipment te preyent after using it ewner ef F eatu res f A i is I i I f 2 Hegging equipment 1 all Tewels er ether items sheulcl net be used te quotpeekquot the use ef a machine think tissue paper quotchepe ingquot ancl yeu39ll get the iclea Hazel F39erera senier tness instructer at Tampines CIubFITT gym reckens that peeple sheulcl net eyen rest en the machine in between exercise sets quotGlur gym limits users te 2 minutes en a piece ef cardie equipment plus a fIyeminute ceelingclewn perieclquot saicl Ms Perera She suggests deing weights er use the stepper er rewer while waiting fer yeur turn 8 Net returning weights Many gym users cle net put the clumpbells back in place after using them and is frustrating fer ether users whe can39t find the weight en the rack else equipment left en the fleer can cause acciclents 9 Threwing weights on the greund Granted that weights are heayy ancl yeu are tired frem lifting them but threwing them en the greund is incensiclerate The leucl thucl might giye a rucle sheck te ether peeple areunq yeu and serieusly what are yeu trying te preye iii WRITING FEATURE STORI B FOR NEWSPAPERS They are written in the following forms 1 2 3 4 5 6 Pro les First Person ampFirst Person Participatory Howto Stories Hobby OrOccupation Stories 39llcavelStories Special Section Stories eg Science Health Sports Ertertainment 1 2 3 4 5 6 CHARACTERI STI CS Broader39lime Span Very Detailed Not Written In Inverted Pyramid Structure Focused On Personalities amp Human Interest Iike 1y 39Ib Have Descriptive Writing Iike 1y 39Ib Use Narrative 39Ibchnique s 1 BROADERTIMESAN 9 Itis closely tied to the news ofthe day 9 But the timeliness is much broader39 9 In daily newspapers most feature sections operate on a schedule thatis planned severalweeks and even I months inadvance 2 o REAEROFDEI39AILS 9 Because they are not closely tied to the breaking news ofthe day most feature stories assume readers have already read the hard details and are now looking forotherkinds of info 9 Eg A feature on whatit takes to keep food fresh and safe forconsumption at what temperatures etc Most people would have known that two people had died from eating Indian rojak recently 3 WPITI39EN IN PYRAMID STRUCTURE 9 A majority ofpeople will notread a story to the end when it s written in invertedpyramid style 9 But feature writers can count many oftheir 39 readers sticking with the story to the end V 9 since they readinmore completeleisurely fashion 9 Therefore feature story s middle and end are 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big news and feature event 9 Fora feature writer there is always a human connection 9 A ood in an isolated kampong wouldn t be much ofa story unless it affected someone 9 Descriptive writing is especially useful because feature stories are longer and needs to be entertaining Mon Jun I39 EEIEIE The Straits Times lg Printfriendly IE Emailafriend mST i in I I E ingL l Winning a painful battle Former pastor Dayid Ong describes himself as a house husband When the 48yearold leayes his house it is to driye his seyenyearold son Joshua to and from school and to his enrichment classes His wife 39y39y39hee Ling 43 is the financial controller of a software company As part of his daily routine MrOng makes sure he and his son bond by swimming or reading together In between he also finds time to counsel and mentor youths But the most important item on his schedule is time for rest and recuperation for Mr l39JIng suffers from multiple myeloma a cancer of the plasma cell for which there is no known cure MUItlple m39fEIDlna Occurs I39ll See other Stow there Is an accidental mutation of the DNA of the plasma cells when they diyide and multiply He said 39My wife has really sacrificed a lot Joshua is also yery sensitiye When he knows I39m tired he tells me to go rest39 Plasma cells are normally found in Mr IClng has not always been housebound He was a pastor at the ge marina afrldhprgiucg Faith Community Eaptist lChurch until EDD4 when he was struck an D ES to E p g tm Edmn39 down with multiple myeloma a blood disorder where ekcessiye abnormal plasma cells are found in the bone marrow When they turn cancerous they occuoILI soace in the bone marrow 6 IJKELYTO USE STORYTELLI NG TECHNIQUE 9 News stories use inverted pyramid Striving to get the hard information to the reader asap 9 Butfeature stories because oftheirinterest in entertaining the reader equently use narrative techniques 9 The storytelling ofa good feature has a beginning a middle and an end l 9H7 I Tr 7 pa s u a 7 p m I 7 I 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pages are usually smaller since you can t predictreaders screen sizes Option to enlarge upon click L 4 ll edls 1V 39 h b e r 5 311 i 1 Wb stozie b e Q i311 HIS m W J THENEW MOTI39O IN MODERN NEWSROGVIS 9 An online rst news philosophy takes shape in two key waves 9 1 Story planning While gathering the news reporters and editors need to decide when and where each story should run The most effective online stories are tailored to the Web rightfrom the start 1 9 2 Story Posting In the world of247 journalism Web quot users demand news now and ifyou don t scramble to 4 feed theirneed someone else will So online reporting p constant posting 9 Not allstories are timesensitive Features pro les columns reviews it s best to waitti they re polished and nished RPM AT TO O REAKI NG NEWS 9 Posta headline the instant news breaks Add a sentence ortwo ofdetails ifyou can 9 Minutes later posta twoparagraph briefthat quickly summarises key facts 9 lhen write a fourparagraph story using this structure gt What happened and why gt A statement orquote from an authority gt What s at stakewhy readers should care gt Additionaldetails 9 Revise and update as new info comes in Posta longer more polished story once you gatherenough material II he 139 e 0 1 2 u d 1 20 l o Pea Iquot 13 m 7 S u d dl dl am e J a a a i f ess ed 1 4m m quot395 39 F E J lquot e qde m r a r i F I J f r 0 f amp m 9 we reimdlers 0 SO HOW DO USES READ N THEWEB 9 People IaIely Iead Web pages ond by WOId instead they scan the page pic king out individual onds and sentences 9 In a recent study it was found that 79 of Web users always scanned any new page they came across only 16 read ondbyond WRITINGFORONL NEMEDIA Tips forcreating readable userfIie ndly news sto Iie s forWeb site s 1 i Chunk y0 11139 4 Enhance your mfo Imatlo n Sto 1y with 2 Add subheads extra bulle ts amp lists 3 13 me nts 3 Rethinkwhata st01y is package combination oftext and new media 39 options WRITINGFORONU NEMEDIA 0 Web pagesshould Employ sc annable 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Iinksprevide enonnousbene tsforboth writers and readers 0 Writers c an supplement theirsto ries with useful extmngeaderscan decide which ofthose extras to pursue and peruse 0 Butreading precessbecomesnrore fragmented linking is interactive but also interruptive Every time you intenuptthe ow ofyourstory to dangle a fresh new optioninfrentofyourreaders there s a riskthey llleave and neverconre back aO39PORATI NG u NKS 0 Keep linkwording short Don tjust say Move orClickheIe Use wordsorphrasesthat clearly indicate where they re going 9 6 Eg voting history campaign ad 0 Guidelinesforadding links gt Ie t links sub stitute fo rle ng thy background details gt links must be voluntary not mandatory gt Use links as attIib utio n USER PARTICIPATION Advantages 1 Web usersare everywhere YOU REnot rJheycan provide witness accounts photos Videosfor additionalcoverage Web usershave untapped expertiseAmost everyone isan expertat something and can add contentto make yourstoriesricher Web userswanta communalexperience rJhey wantto know whatotherpeople are thinking and saying USER PARTICIPATION Disadvantages 1 Readersare unprofessional 39Jhey mistake opinions forfacts 39Jhey may lie39hey may notrespect copyright 2 Readersare unreliable lheycontribute when they re motivatednotbecause they re obligated 3 Ittakestime and energy to setup and maintain use r frie ndly Web element Monitoring and editing thisextra materialc an be a headache for r understaffed newsrooms 111631quot mwm w S a is well f i i M I CONVERGENCE 0 The adventofthe Web made itpossible to listen to audio watchvideo and read the entire textofa newspaperon a single p1atf0rrn 1echnology hasconverged 9 Byjoining forces newspapercompaniesare able to expand theiraudience 39IVcan bene t from a large print staffto getto more stories CURREVT U M ITS amp THEWI E OPEV FUTURE 0 Experts say the web w lcontinue to evolve 0 Web journalism w lalso evolve with it 0 Web joumaljstsw lbe required to write a briefversionofa storyaswellasa longer version with linksembedded inthe copy to an eljbIaIy aswellasto otherweb pages WRI Tl Na B ROADCAST O A combination ofsights and sounds 9 A business where every second counts 0 Watching orlistening to a news broadcast generally requires less intellectual effort than reading a complex news story in print oronline w RI Tl Ne B ROADCAST Rememberthe 4 characteristics ofmedia Writing 9 Accuracy 0 Completeness 9 Ef ciency 9 Precision Broadcast writing emphasizes ef ciency But ef ciency should notcome at the expense of any ofthe othercharacteristics EH Cl ENCY Ef ciency is one ofthe most prized writing characteristics Itmeans using the fewest words to present yourinfonnation accurately and clearly Ef ciency is difficultto achieve because 0 Most ofus write ineffic iently especially on rst draft 0 Most ofus do not do a good job in editing our writing 0 The world is lled with inefficient writing and we often fallvic m to it w RI Tl Na B ROADCAST 9 In different media stories require 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amp m H 0 a m o m J n U 019 me i st d lavas 5 si 2 Write 2 Th 13 i ea In t d mi US 30 tlm n 0 000 write 20 1 m 1 2 0 13 390 2 0 ham t a IFFEREVCE INWRITINGSTYLE You will note some Iealdi 39erences in yourwriting style when you begin writing forbmadcast namely 9 Sentences willbe shorten You llwrite more simple sentences and fewercomplex ones You lluse the present tense moxe O Attribution will be handled differently DI FFERBQCB IN WRITI N3 STYLE Details particularly numbers will also be handled differently in yourcopy proNUNseeAshun Pay attention to the way words sound together Forinstance too many s sounds can be di icultto say 1 aloud sea shells by the seashore You must also include phonetic spellings for unusualunfamiliarwords Remember your f I copy is being written so that someone can 39139 read it out loud Help the person reading it as much as possible A WELLW RI 39lTEN STORY WI LLCONTAI N 3 BASIC NGRI BITS 1 The writercaptures the essence ofthe story inthe lead 2 The copy doesn t sound like it s been written at all It will sound like one side ofa conversation as ifthe anchoris talking to someone 3 The writerpresents the facts in narrative storytelling a F E r I n 1 J a I u a w n m g z u p J u I r a r n F a m 7 a K u a p A y 1 n a f at u m i a f A g FA 3 g a 9 Fr 1 n W F i a A u 4 r A 1 a V n 1 an I I r I a a a a i u I i v f 5 rs Fu a r i r an a g I Z a a a s a i p a a r i a m a 1 he J die i diet I II P I in r if w l r r i r r 39 1 i p a t a q 5 T V E Q a a q r u a u amp 4 n m w E a i w r h e a H m z u a a a g E n H r w 7 e a WHE WRI Tl N6 THE LEAD Grab the viewer s attention right away by capturing the essence ofthe story Don t make the lead hard to digestby loading it down with too many facts Don t write a lead that sounds dated or stale Write in active voice Use narrative storytelling technique Write conversationally use the mom rule THEMCJVI RULE Write the way people listen lhis technique is known as writing for the ear 39lhus write the way people talk Keep sentences short make the tone friendly and infonnal but not so infonnalas to be chatty orsilly CAPTURI NG THE VI EWER S ATI39EIT ON 0 Rememberthata newsworthy story is one that the Viewers nd bene cialor valuable 9 In orderto capture in yourlead the essence ofwhat makes yourstory newsworthy you must know it yourself CPI T Cl SMS OF ROADCAST NEWS Not everyone thinks that the bmadcastnews profession is doing the best it can forvieweIs Here are some ofthe majorcxiticisms of broadcast news 0 It s too short and too shallow Broadcast news writing is so limiting thatit doesn t allow writerenough time to give info amp i details that would enlighten the listener f Mosthoadcast news stories are 20 to 30 seconds long Ihat simply isn t enough time to do any view much good CRI Tl Cl SIMS OF ROADCAST NEWS 9 Broadcast news emphasizes the super cialratherthan the substantive Critics say broadcast news reporters often pick out the sensationalorthe most unusualaspectofa story to emphasize ratherthan what is the most important CRITI Cl SMS OF ROADCAST NEWS Pictures oraudio drive a story One ofthe sayings in the profession is Ifit bleeds it leads Ihat means the bloodierormore horri c the pictures the more likely itis that the story will lead the newscast Anotheraspect ofthis critic ism is that stories are broadcastbecause the station has lm oraudio not because the stories themselves are worthy CRI Tl Cl SMS OF BROADCAST NEWS 9 Broadcast news writers depend on cliches ratherthan information particularly to end theirstories Many reporters nd an ending that says in effect Who knows or We l have to wait and see convenient forending a story Teasers and Promos 9 Designed to getpeople to listento or watch the news 0 Written inthe same basic style as news but they are not news in fact they failif they have realnews value to them 0 Can make a big difference inthe size of the audience the more interesting the news programme looks orsounds the more likely people will watch I II 7 I a c I r 7 I 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0 Overthe semesterbIeak it was announced that poly tuition fees will go up by 100 You amp yourmanaging editorthink that s a bad idea so you wantto WIite an editorialabout it 9 But yourspoIts editorsays that halfofthe new fees will go to the athletic departmentto support the women s soccerteam OPINICNWRITING 9 Yourfeature editorthinks the new fees won t be thatbad because some ofitwill go to support the poly stage arts and symphonic orchestra 9 How are you going to handle this diversity of opinion Do you write the editorialand claim it as the newspaper s of cialopinion although two ofyourtop editors disagree 9 Do you publish two editorials with opposite opinions OPINII WRITING 9 Do you run personal columns instead and leteach editorhave his orher opinion in print that way 9 D0 youjustback o 39fmm the issue entirely so won t raise a ruckus h S n m m 0 C 9 na m g m m m mm r m d e e m m m m m o 9 Reviews 9 Editorials are the opinion ofthe newspaper broadcast station magazine orwebsite as an institution 9 Newspapereditorials which are the expressed opinion ofthe newspaper are usually arrived at by a group known as the paper s editorialboard 9 In some papers the process begins with deciding which issues to write editorials about This is frequently a topic that has been in the news forquite a while 9 Eg Casino jobs forthe elderly crime againstchildien foreign maids 9 Who gets to write a particular editorial It s usually the person who has the most knowledge on the topic athand Editorials and columns provide personality and passion to a paper I Editorial usually 39 Editorialcartoon from 300 to 500 combines art and words comments commentary of on current events current events appears to express Column Signed the opinion ofthe Opinion paper Ethesundiytilmes March 297 EDITORIAL 30 one shouid he surprised if hushers bemoan the slew of regulations which confine them to 109 designated spots including 14 along Orchard Road After all the word hush comes from the middle Spanish quothookerquot meaning to seek or to wander Surely the new rules constitute another symptom of regulationeprone i fine city Singapore Not quite As Minister for Information Communications and the Arts Lee Boon Yang has pointed out bushing should be done in orderElly manner without creating disemenities to other users of public spaces The restrictions also some after complaints about noise pollution especially from those performers who use sound amplification Moreover such regulations are not new Ancient Rome banned public perfonnsnees which parodied the gouemment lllrufujir Will in England ordered the licensing of minstrels and players those who disobeyetl were whipped This of course won t happen here in thesundoytlmes March 22 2009 eorronmt bout he ease of the Americans who choked on the size Plane air exonditioned too and served by friendly staff in L 39 oi the bill for alleged monster prawns otters uniionn if you like grilled prawns that much make your g infinite variations on a 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Is the number pelted ten small fer a representative feel nt general reeeptinIn tn sneh a plan Withr shuttle Gardens ancl Upper Themsen be eels fer feed hnt net entertainment 39 39 quot quot 39 lt s net just shunt live masts it Is shunt lee all rnnsin tee not let these hndtltng39rnnsteians start semenhere near herse l1ar ssil3939alr at eemntunity level a Perhaps mast are seneernetl ahent neise tenels I he liens be liene tn prevent netse pelln tlnn fer example h s nundpreeting Certain restrletinns enuldalse eensidere aniline music areas ee39ulnhe eennerted tn study areas an wealt days It would he need for parents te lnlnw children are nut er studying near hente rather than further swan Smeapnreans may have the stereetypieal idea that line mnste means sleaze but this is net true sf Singapere Nightlife Shtganere is net the hareleere hasdsell variety which snme enun tries esnleit tn lure tenristsr 39 We shnuld he mere seenmindset and seen tn the patential grnwth at a new and livelyr snheenltnre h saytng yes tn live the neighhnurhen Finns Hang was Movie s TV shows Books Pla ys Music Art e xhib its Dance Performance Throw a iclay 1 April 25 2am From roolr musical to roclc starsquot The cast and an of We Will Hook Foo sound off EHFEISTUP H EFI Tl H ohriatophemoh 39madiaoorpromag quotFifiELI do the mem bers of WEE Has do afterper orming on stageiquot39i39iquotell they go 39to o39d39ier clubs 39to perform apparently it le ast that s what the show39s star Mill Ayesa and some band members didlast neelLThey were at a party organised by 12 Below r39odlra and jumped on stage to perform Queen songe realms and odnerIEamiLiar favourites and original numbers I39It s always very rooli EnE roLl with 39thia bandquot said mueioal di rector Rowan Ealrlrer who at 35 is one of 39the youngest musical direotors for a major musical Ever since Iwasa lo39d Iwant ed to be a rooli starquot said ma I39llully mum was Eretting beoa39u se she sa dootor my dad39sa lawyer grandfathers were doo39tors brother s an opton39ie39lrist and halfbrotl39ier is a medical stu dent and then there s mequot But much 39to hia mother39s dis may I still don t hate my de greequot admitted due 33 yearold who said he chose roc39li 39n39 roLl o39rer a Con39in39i39un ica39tions degree with a major initiJm productiotn He may not hate adegreebut he dom haveanalbum outin storms Entided GJt con39tains covers of classic39rorlr songs and three origi Iquot I I39II39II nal numbers he wrote Sea Lesell Iwidiayideo circulating mamquot Fm Aiu ii39and orali Ir But it s not just Ayesa who wants 39to rooli o39u39L Willquot Rock Fan drummer Matthew M39arinxus had his own band playing original numbers betre hejoined the show 3in guitarist Nick Kendall 39u sed to be in a c39oyers band when he was 12 playing I39eyerything from Elvis 39to modern stuHquot The 13 yearold guitarist has the distinction oEbeing dneyoungest memberin39tliem39usical39s band his tory he was only 15 wl39i en he joined an original SouthAfrican production two years ago rnd though he wasn t even born when ueenreoorded 39dneir memorable hits he said it39s impossible not to lotnrthenriLeic cf ueen quotEven be fore Ilcnewabou39t Iwasplaying ueensongs in oluba and stuffquot Kendall said By contrast the rst time Ma nusplayed u een songswas when he joined 39the show I39E39u39t the songs they39ve written are so timelessquot said the 23yearold drummer quotI lil39ill li one ofthe most amazing 39dnings is 39dna39t Queen left such a legacy with their musio tl39ia39ta whole bunch ofyoungsters from South Afrioalilre myselli39oan travel the world just because Huey started something long agoquot Well I read on 39the Internet that 39dney39re doing a sequel so there s my next jobl cjuipped Ealckeralthougl39i he said he would n39t mind being a musical direotor on Broadway or li39ia estEndquotH1 did n39t have music in LiE39eI would Thusor iclay April 25 sore classic rockacinga and 39lhr39ee original numbers diequot he added or Ayesa l39ie39s already planning another album quotall original stLtFE39 more organjorocl and soul land he wants 39to do everything really I see mysel39li having children writing songs for lms producing for upandooming bands doing 39d39ie odd 39tour now and then or just ue odd 39dieatre showquot he said He s also been inrrited 39to perform at this year s EingFest but lnothing39s been cotrtliirm el yetquot And he migh39tgje39t that degree after all quotI 39thinli wl39i en I m in my S s or Ems I39ll go KEEP IN HDGHIH39 FilliEAyeaa39a album arrlj39 ed MiG Einaatjgcontsina souera of h l 3 i F r I I I j u I l 39 I r 3quot l P 1 i F39 39 g a 39Now sa good timeto f 39 39quot 39 nish Unrr39ersl39ty quot 53353 l j L r i I Just donquottepect r lt If P ml 39 5 him to gl39re up m39uslo I39It s the ultimate v m I j39 39u r aquot quot selfexpression and creativity and job sa 9 5 F if V f faotionquot said Ayala quotI could never not t r r F l form That39s my soul in am pertormin 1 f f r39 2quot H J I lnowI m in a good placequot I Er a t l r g5 G as our safari C ri 39i FEE Eula Rosa Fan miss an A r sat aka Esplanade r1w in W r 11 H Fri 7 l r ml Mil l w l U l r l int L l Fl 1 1744 Chiba steels hire the medarn werllcll atter ht years at iselatieh WAFI EEHUUT 39tras39ell stein swat ll a39it I erase THE abundance ef nteitican 13939intajge cars eut putting en the sheets afHaa39ana says it all Fer 5t Cuba has remained unchanged under farmer President Fidel Cashie39e eeriiriiunist gerernment The trade embarge inipesecl by the United States after the 1959 Cuban Rer elutieri when Caetre austecl military leader General Eadeta has limited H39UE number ef new geeds entering the ceuntrjr The embarge is still in place but since Cashe s y39eunger brether Etaul teal ever the reins at newer in the spring Cubans have seen radical changes Ther can new buyr cemnutxers ND players micrewave evens arid mehile ehenee They are even allewecl ta stay at Cuban reserts feiaiierljr eeen enly ta teurists Sis much as these changes will intereve the quality eflife efCulhans immensely the will aJse alter Hie character efthe eeuntrlj as eeeple hare larewn itiurthe past five decades The EDUDlIlj lSDlan Ereni the Li at Fleei Iia 1a39ill became nie re acceeeible te teuriats inteimatienal hetel chains and businesses and the island will been me me re like an ether Caribbean island Se tar rCuba s caeital Havana seems te be free en in time Cuba 1arias a celenjr ef Spain fer alriiest stilt years until 1393 and the mast remantic and beautiful part ef the city Clld Havana new a LTnesce hen39ta e site with its celeu r ful eelanial buildings feundecl h the Spanish Frem Old Havana I strelled aleng the beule39a39arcl te the picturesque seafrent the h Ialecen The cars en e shreet 1a39ere Anter ican elassirs P Igrnieutha Ferds that had been breught tn the aeuntrjr helere the rev elutien Theugh an anachrenism the cars match their settings their celeure and age blend with the eastel ehades ef the crumbling ye still beautiful barequestjn39le buildings in the backgreund thew llThuredalir 1 hpril 24r EDGE Iquot ii 1 Ctther ase ects ef Cuba39s culture and his term are amplydiselayed en the walls ef pub lic buildings Cln these are painted ceunt lees murals at the rer elutien arid Che Guevara the rerelutienarywhe helped CaaL tee te newer The streetsare alse where Cubans meet te chat playquot chess erwatnch the u39euth Ila3r baseball Its net uneeninien fer Cubans ta call eut quotHale geese 1ehich nieans BIlea handsemefquot te passing fereigners W39Equ El MO 1 118 The Nugget By C LAlHISSE F OHCA Iith togedier some action conned Steve 3 Hell and Thin Fey and die result is a movie called Date Night Starting two of Hollywood39s most weltkooun ltonied39inns Date Night is another comedy that will keep viewers laugh mg in their seats Directed to ShomlLei Card Fe play Phil Claire Foster a married couple who are atocl hung in a dull everyday routine Hey withtheir two yoinag Children and have hot ingjobs ETer Friday night they have a date night where dle39j go to the some fanailyrettau rant eat the some food and have the same con versations which leads the couple to start quE S Liuminl Lheh 39 U quot39 liamiiuee quot a remit they decide to spice up to a fanny Manhattan restaurant on their next date When die couple is denied a table Phil sponta neously steals the reservation don t noahou39 couple named is where dsebad luclc begins When two cromes appear at their table the Foster are mistaken for the Tripple horns Here nd out that the Eripplehoma have stolen a aah citire filled uith incriminat ing hiforma on om Manhatth lord Mllerto This gets the Fosters into big trouble and puts themtlnough a roilereoastei39 ofconaital events at attempt to clear their names om a come theydid not commit 3th the most I39idl llD LEi and q39nlILy situa tions invoking pole dancing highspeed car chases and a shirtless noon the plot is quite amusing Hoii39et39a it39s nothing new Hn39s hype of comedy plot has heen done before So what made one such a great motquotlei It39s simple The actors of course There s no disappoint ment when it come to Carell and Fe as they pirolre to be the perfect ontcreenpainng Their chaonnig presence constant energy and loini ous acts are the perfect chemistry and will draw 39w39eweIj mm the actnet andkeen them hooked to nd out what happennext There are also oome amazing special effects used in thia moxie One parooular scene invites a highspeed car 11323 which shows o these e ects as can spin out of control and rush hydzngerousl literal this movie is def imtely worth seeing as it guarantees a lot of iat lghi Iris 2 great moxie to watch for a canal andfini date so go aheadand give thorn go it is darenighquot a er all 39i i i r Thursday April 3010 ENTERTAINMENT lVlake a date r DIM CERT REVIIEW TilIE TIllNE TINGS The Lift duo rocked the rst Bi Might Dirt CHRIETDF iHiER TUIIH thiri39l39tophertohtgmedioeo Katie WISE nearing a honing T ahirt and leather tighta in fine form hoax ing tlltE d to oing along jump along 39I llEEtE have tieen thanr oongadledieated to and clap along 1 song after oong an39n die halting fun The Beach Fun Fun Fun opening kernenrgtfi iiell ihh tome Slat ung Cyndi lauper ti ii lsinst li i39unn o HM Fun of Stilt Uniind Lot lilo Go to the pounding lgglr F 5 Fun Tito e all of which would if That hi1 My Nina1c have been the appropriate theme songs u l 39i 7 thw39ye only for Midi Productions first hig party gig got one album after all the shiny left ofthe year called ig lilight tint on pooped linen after the liing39l39ings left Undaunted lay diedownponr ear er the stage seneml members of the audi n the day around 25illii peoplehooped enceotill continued to narty39ao a J noun nto Fort Eanning Part on Tueorlay night toueoneluetant to let the good 39li39ill ltii no to have inn Thetalented IFI rce rnitand slits may Wang Chung would have Wiley indeed if proceedntgniaut illlE furl told we y had fun that night poppy nuance ll39lE of HE39S moot him doing The Elite Mention Elliott auditEmilie were tootagimslly Energie cin their Singapore debut new reemmrei 15 menU 1th 5 1 mm L th i egfterc39 Empaming 1 mi fjgeae wimriirie reeevite F DESIGNED m 100k like a carnival ef ebjecme39 the epace ceuid have ees y leapt 2qu cf 3 I QECJs design magazine spread There s a neat fawn ef earpet grass and ceEenrfu theirs awe table5 seftiy lit by big mend ames at night It fezele like a dehghrful eef39lieie n between Mad Men and Mme In WenderiiendAnd ifs a great plieee tea kick back an we night with an icy ceckm in hand Ef yeu39vd eeked me after rst dining at experience at Sauce severe zrnenthe agar mum have mid yewu mat rjrmke were mfmite y better than the 39chd m amine menu wee msed Emund an rmti39irrarar lie 01quot geecement ester 1 mrd r39rd weu d eeme with e aeiec ien eaf lree geaueee en the REVI EWS Reviewers usually try to summarise and then assess the good points and bad ofa particularofferings 1 Reviewers typically review something for 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