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Business Communications

by: Lorine Hilll

Business Communications MGMT 102

Lorine Hilll

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Randal Benfield

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Date Created: 10/05/15
MGMT 102 Business Communications Business Writing Analysis Spring 2014 IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS 1 To do well on this assignment make sure that you understand the principles and techniques in Hynes Chapter 4 and on pages 2326 of the Resource Book 2 Submit this assignment through SacCT by 1159 pm on March 6 3 When you are ready to submit your answers go to gt Assessments gt Business Writing Analysis 4 Click SAVE AND SUBMIT only when you are ready to submit the assignment to the instructor Directions Study the e mail message below analyzing the business style The subject line and rst sentence are effective as written Select the most appropriate answer for each question Questions 1 and 2 are worth 5 points each questions 3 8 are worth 3 points each Question 9 is worth 2 points From Director of Human Resources Sent Monday January 6 2014 To All Employees Subject Bonus Vacation Day in 2014 for Every Employee 1 All BusComm employees will receive an appreciation vacation day in 2014 2 Your leaders have made a decision to reward your hard work during 2013 3 We want to reward the best team of employees in the company s past history 4 We know that you will enjoy your bonus vacation day 5 You may utilize your extra vacation day during most months this year with the approval of your supervisor 6 However you may not take your bonus day during October because of our holiday production schedule 7 Attached please nd a copy of our vacation request form 8 It must be submitted at least one month before your requested date 9 It is important that you write bonus day in the reason box 10 Ithank you in advance for your continued hard work What is the style problem in Sentence 6 Rewrite the sentence effectively Which sentence uses passive voice Rewrite the sentence effectively Which sentence contains a pair of words that are redundant 993 Sentence 1 Sentence 3 Sentence 9 none of the above Which sentence contains an ungrounded superlative 999 Sentence 2 Sentence 3 Sentence 10 none of the above Which sentence contains an eXpletive a b c d Sentence 5 Sentence 7 Sentence 8 Sentence 9 The message illustrates the concept of readercentered wording by a b c d beginning Sentence 5 with the word you beginning Sentence 10 with the word I both of the above none of the above Which of the following would be an effective substitute for Sentence 10 993 The company thanks you in advance for your continued hard work Thanking you in advance for your continued hard work Thank you in advance for your continued hard work None of the sentences above would be an effective substitute Which of the following would be an effective substitute for Sentence 4 You will enjoy your bonus vacation day We are sure that you will enjoy your bonus vacation day We hope that you enjoy your bonus vacation day The company is sure that you will enjoy your bonus vacation day 993 The date for the midterm exam is a March 17 b March 18 c March 19 d March 20


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