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This 1 page Class Notes was uploaded by Mariane Greenfelder on Monday October 12, 2015. The Class Notes belongs to ENGL 150 at Ferris State University taught by Tracy Webb in Fall. Since its upload, it has received 16 views. For similar materials see /class/221633/engl-150-ferris-state-university in Foreign Language at Ferris State University.
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Date Created: 10/12/15
Introduction The thesis in bold states the claim Supporting ideas that will be developed later in the same order are brie y put forth The thesis of this paragraph restates the rst supporting idea from the introduction Speci c examples to illustrate this point are given through storiesanecdotes A transition underlined ties this paragraph to the preceding one The paragraph s thesis in bold is a restatement of the second point in the introduction and supporting examples are expanded with documented quotes or paraphrases from sources Again a transition underlined ties this paragraph to the preceding one The paragraph39s thesis in bold is a restatement of the third point in the introduction and supporting examples are expanded with documented quotes or The conclusion essentially restates the introduction I need a Fall semester break Such a break would bene t mein a number of important ways lMy physical health would be improved by a hiatus from classes 2 Mental health too would bene t from a break Of equal or greater importance 3a fall break would help me improve my grades With a break in the semester and the chance to go home my health would bene t example lLike many students I often over extend myself sleeping too little and eating poorly A break in classes would allow me to catch up on missed sleep A few weeks ago example 2 Furthermore on break I would be more likely to eat healthfully If I went home I could eat homecooked healthy food Even if I stayed in town I would have more time to shop and cook nutritiously When I m at school I eat A break would not onlv bene t mv phvsical health but my mental health as well A chance to get away would lessen stress and solidify bonds both helpful to improving mental health Example 1 Even in the best of circumstances living with a roommate or roommates can be stressful as one learns to adapt to others ways of living The opportunity to return home would provide a respite from roommate frictions My own roommate isn t too bad but even we ght sometimes Last week Example 2 At the same time it would give me the chance to reestablish bonds with my parents and old friends For example the last time I went home It is not iust as a phvsical being that I would bene t from a break however I am at school to succeed and a prime indicator of this success is grades A fall break would give me a chance to improve my grades Example 1 I m worried I might end the semester with poor grades because of poor timemanagement I know I shouldn t procrastinate but for my last math test example 2 Furthermore success in courses especially on testsdepends on a rm grasp of subject material A class free week would give me time to review information already covered in the course using such methods as copying over notes and redoing problems If I had more time Iwould A fall break would bene t me in a number of ways improving physical health mental health and grades
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