Revise the selection in Exercise 1 by turning it into a series of short simple
Chapter 7, Problem EXERCISE 2(choose chapter or problem)
Revise the selection in Exercise 1 by turning it into a series of short simple sentences. Then revise it again to eliminate the simple sentences entirely by turning every sentence into a compound, complex, or compound-complex sentence. How do your revisions change the effect? Read the original excerpt; then read your revisions aloud, and listen to the difference.
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